I dreamed of you

[Starfish2lime]

[i]I had a dream
and you were there
I looked your way
and started to stare
I licked my lips
untangled my hair
and readied myself
for your glare
You walked on over
on step at a time
and looked straight ahead
right into my mind
And some how you saw
my hopes and dreams
then you took me to the clouds
flying with your wings
I had a dream
and you were there
I looked your way
and stared to stare
you kissed my cheek
and held my hand
your the sweetest person
in my dream land.

Writing that one was fun :P

[Barefoot Matt]

on step at a time
And some how you saw
your the sweetest person

Those three lines should be:
one step at a time
And somehow you saw
you're the sweetist person

they're just little things. other than that:
I love it, it's absolutely wonderful! lighthearted, flowing, well-rhymed! Excellent work!

[Laya]

Lighthearted, whimisical, and dreamy... Good job.

[hunnybunz]

Wow, that's really good! I really enjoyed reading it, you should get it published or submit it to something.

[heartbrokenbaby]

Dat wuz good I lyked it great job it reminds me of dreams i've had lol :wink:

[lillover1]

ohhh....that was a great poem! i really liked it. well i liked it alot keep up the good work!