Ocean's Tide

[daydreamer]

We walked along that ocean shore
Hand in hand
As the sun set, on yet another day of our lives
I felt as if it was setting on a chapter
of Our story.
"I don't want you to leave" I whispered
Hoping, praying you could not hear my confession
Over the crashing ocean's tide
Arms wrapped around me
in a gentle, warm embrace
And speaking softly in my ear
"My love, no matter how far I go
I will never leave you.
For our emotions
Are the ocean
Deep and never ending."
"But my love, " I quickly reply
"The ocean's tide can become
a frightful sight
Destroying that which was strong."
You smile and reply
"Ah yes, but even in these moments
The ocean's tide can not be parted
The same goes for you and I."

[Barefoot Matt]

Nice narrative, very touching, good metaphors. Typo on line 3 ("or").

:Ps: I love your sig! DMB rocks! :cool3:

[Truth]

That was a great poem...I liked it alot..... :)