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Truth
April 8th, 2002, 02:11 PM
So everyone, here is the completed chain poem that we started back in Feb.

These are the following people that contributed to it...In the order of how the replied not by the number of replies...

Truth
heartbrokenbaby
Hallow13
hunnybunz
FireFly
PkledGrape



[u][b]My Lone Valentine

Red roses around, heart shaped cards everywhere
Couple's kiss under every tree
as they are watched by cupid's stare

Love is in the air.
Couples holding hands,
Roses bloom everywhere.

Still black remains my color
Rose red is false and trite
Without your soulful other

I run on empty; as I feel the pain
I am untrue to my own self
and heartwrenched from my own shame

Why is it I can't be like the other,
Hopefuly in love.
Instead of being the strutter

Why must I always be alone
My red rose is dead
My heartbreak is shown

a passing phase, a passing life
torture and condemned
my soul is forever in strife

Alway in pain ,
For the love i don't have.
And nothing to gain

Arrows shot with my heart as a wild bore,
Slayin for sport...
I can't take this loninless any more.

What love ought to be I find in yesteryear
Of fake flowers wrinkled and faded valentines
What day once held joy now is gray and austere

The day with out flowers.
No one to hold,
And no love powers.

take time to head what i say
falseness of love true
this is my lone valentine's day

For now it shall always be gray,
For I no longer hold the power of love.
With heartache I pay ........

Truth
April 8th, 2002, 02:23 PM
I really enjoy these chain poems and I would like us to do more of them..Everyone did a wonderful job in there writing and in their ability to contribute their talent to this poem. For that I say thanks....


so the one that ended this poem is

::drum roll::


heartbrokenbaby

::confetti::

You are the poem stopper....Here is your prize

http://www.coldgamer.com/poemstop.jpg

please insert this url, in your sig tag text form located in your profile...

http://www.coldgamer.com/poemstop.jpg

contabulations....


Now, as the poem stopper, you are the next one to start the next chain poem...You decide on the title, the subject you want us to reflect in the poem and the rules...and also you decide the winner..If you need help, feel free to email, pm, IM and anyother M's me. I am more than happy to help you out....
-Truth