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rabidcowfromhell
April 20th, 2005, 03:05 PM
it's been, like, a year, so i decided to write another (crappy) poem...enjoy!


I walk through the forest at night,
feet crunching along the fallen and forgotten foliage
Admiring the serene beauty of the stars above,
a million points of beauty on god’s infinite canopy
Their light is comforting, and it guides me,
their radiance is nothing compared to yours
A warm breeze moves abreast to me,
it envelops my body, for a second, I feel your hand in mine
It’s fleeting, but it makes me smile,
a smile you have many a times brought to my face.

mini696
April 20th, 2005, 08:11 PM
Cool.

Asphodelle13
April 21st, 2005, 01:26 AM
*claps* Very lovely, Will. I like the bit of alliteration in the second line, too. Keep writing!

SmOkYpRiNcEsS
April 22nd, 2005, 11:45 AM
:bounce: