The Change of Days.

[KnappyOne]

This is a poem I've been working on for awhile, but it finally came to me.

The Change of Days.

All I feel is hatred
All I view is chaotic
All I wish for is death
End this sickness called humanity
Bring me to my salvation
Bring me joy
Bring me death on swift wings
Make me suffer no longer.

Since birth, all I've yearned for is death
As a child, the rage burned within
Deep, Dark, angry thoughts were my only companion
As I aged, the thoughts intensified
Growing stronger and stronger by the day
Manifesting within

Then one day,
Gone,
All the hatred,
All the Anger,
Gone.
I was happy,
I found my love.

All I feel is love
All I view is blissful
All I wish for is her undying love
I've found my salvation, my joy
She brought her love to me on swift wings
I suffer no longer
Let this never end.

[Asphodelle13]

I love it sweetie...oyyyyyy ::wipes away tear::...good job babe, I loooooooooove you! ::mwah::..::mwah::...::mwaaaaaaah:: :D :mrgreen:

[heartbrokenbaby]

Ahh I lyked dat 1 it wuz goood . Great work :roll:

[Tortuga]

I really like this poem, Gary3221. I love the way you mirror your thoughts in the first stanza to those in the fourth. Great technique!

Tortuga

[KnappyOne]

Thanks all.

Tortuga, that was the hard part for me, I had the first and second stanzas done for quite sometime, but when I was doing the 3rd and fourth, I came across problems with the mirroring, and it took me quite a while to come up with it, and then it just came to me. I was sitting at work, and just started writing.

thanks again all.

[Laya]

Wow, I'm already scanning the forums for more of your work. keep it up, they're captivating.