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JHXMT
June 24th, 2003, 01:30 PM
Any feedback appreciated. :)

Mirrored

The faint reflection watches me.
I can feel its photons observing me now.
Tiny specks,
Motes of knowledge of what I am -
An image on unreflective darkness.
A silhouette of all that was taken,
Removed from the world at its creation.
The light guards the world from me,
Lights the abyss,
Vanishes my soul and pulls it to itself
Illuminating my flaws once again.
And where I had stood
An absence of nothing remains
And the world cries out in pain.

daydreamer
June 24th, 2003, 02:08 PM
I LOVED it, absolutely beautiful work.

"And where I had stood
An absence of nothing remains
And the world cries out in pain."

I don't know why, but I really love that line :)