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FireFly
March 3rd, 2002, 10:01 PM
Sketching Tomorrow

The damage is already done,
My house is burning my home is on fire.
Everything I knew turns to black ash,
Without explanation,
I'm waiting in dire.

Left without home I sit on the street,
Pondering what day is tomorrow.
Wondering where or why I will go.

I take from my ashes a single white sheet,
From crumbled ruins it seemed to survive.
Charcoal all around me;
Steam rises from fires still live,
I sketch a better tomorrow.

As night surrounds me,
I draw black and white.
Until a figment portrait of what was forms in the light.
Until a complete picture of a better day,
I fall asleep where I lay.
Surrounded by ash,
I sketch a better tomorrow.

Colours fill my sketch, the trees all turn green,
The sky a deep blue,
The walls of my house amber and mauve,
It's all in my dreams,
With you there too.

I wake and it rains,
I've got a roof over my head and a comfortable bed.
And a sketch I drew of a better tomorrow.

heartbrokenbaby
March 3rd, 2002, 10:53 PM
Im sure lotz of people can relate to dis just lyke ur other 1 dis iz a good 1 too i lyke da way it portrayz dat tomorrow will be better nice job :)

Truth
March 8th, 2002, 02:16 PM
Sketching Tomorrow

The damage is already done,
My house is burning my home is on fire.
Everything I knew turns to black ash,
Without explanation,
I'm waiting in dire.

I wake and it rains,
I've got a roof over my head and a comfortable bed.
And a sketch I drew of a better tomorrow.


Good poem firefly, but i must say that I can realate to this one very very well.

The lines I have qouted just reminds to much of my home that burned down several years ago.....oh well...

FireFly
March 8th, 2002, 06:51 PM
Hehe, it's not about a house burning down though you do realise right? It's about someone's world collapsing, and they have nothing cept their tallents and who they are... So they use those tallents and later in life everything is great yet they still remember those days... (last 3 lines)

Truth
March 8th, 2002, 06:57 PM
Hehe, it's not about a house burning down though you do realise right? It's about someone's world collapsing, and they have nothing cept their tallents and who they are... So they use those tallents and later in life everything is great yet they still remember those days... (last 3 lines)

dont' worry firefly...I knew what your poem represented...I was just saying that the first few lines reminded me of what happened to me years ago....i know your poetry by now, and I knew you were not writing about a burning house... :mrgreen: