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[rabidcowfromhell]

It’s dark outside now
And the night has no end
If you could only see how
This is not a stupid trend

You must know I’m sincere
This aint no puppy crush
If you could only see and hear
That you’re a total rush

You act like you don’t know
You cant like you don’t care
But you’re not careful and it shows
Stop acting like I’m not even there

There is life after love
Or so they claim to say
But my affection for you fits like a glove
No matter how hard I try, it’s not going away

[BlondTgr]

Cuuuuuute x 1,000 :mrgreen:

[Heath]

that should win an award! its great!

[GrayM&M]

Ahhh.. unrequitted love. I know the feeling all too well.

[dulcinea]

aww, that is so sweet! I'm glad that I heard the rumour telling me that this poem was here. :mrgreen:

[Danae]

I love you, Will. You are beyond amazingly talented :mrgreen:

[Li Mei]

Well done. A few typing errors, It also seems a bit cliche (But my affection for you fits like a glove) although thats not necessarily a bad thing. The Rhyming comes off forced between crush and rush. Better choices exist. Grab a thesaurus when your stuck on words.