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GrayM&M
August 17th, 2002, 03:04 AM
I want my boy to be strong as a titan
I want my boy chisled of stone
I want my boy tender as feathers
My demi-god angel, don't leave me alone.

He'll have a heart as pure as a rainbow
He'll have a mind as sharp as a knife
He'll have eyes like the wind on rivers
My nature-bound lover, complete my life.

I want a lover as straight as an arrow
I want a lover as loyal as blue
I want a lover who'll love me forever
I'll wait for you lover... but who are you?






Another three verses :D Feedback is appreciated!

rabidcowfromhell
August 17th, 2002, 03:23 AM
wait a mintue, i thougt you left....anyways...i like it!

chiukit
August 17th, 2002, 03:23 AM
very nicely written. hehehe. :)

Birdee
August 17th, 2002, 03:25 AM
:lol: Love it......I want one.....*sniffles*

Poor Yorick
August 17th, 2002, 03:33 AM
This is a good poem.... it would be an excellent poem if I wasn't a realist tho :D

LuvaGirl
August 17th, 2002, 02:34 PM
Good job Gray M&M...I like it! How true it is :P

Truth
August 19th, 2002, 12:51 PM
I want a lover who'll love me forever
I'll wait for you lover... but who are you?



Of course that would be me... Sheesh... :roll:



Neways, great poem Gray..... well written.... to bad I am taken or else your wish list would have been answered... (jk)... I couldn't help it... :lol:

Justice
August 19th, 2002, 08:55 PM
This is a GREAT poem, keep writing.

wowzers
August 22nd, 2002, 12:36 PM
sweet... i just ddont understand "loyal as blue"

ArRoWLeGeNd
September 6th, 2002, 06:38 PM
niice, you should turn it into a song...say to the beat of p-diddy's "i need a girl (part1 or 2)"- :P


~ArRoWLeGeNd~