angry

[Rubygirl7879]

ANGRY

What do I want
Don’t watch my lips move
As I throw these daggers
To rip into you

I’ll form them with wisdom
Words cold as steel
To shatter your heart
That never could feel

What do I need
I need you to see
All that you lost
When you gave up on me

How do I feel
Like tearing your soul
From the core of your being
Till you’re no longer whole

Hate-filled and angry
Maybe just a touch
You never did know me
Yet I loved you so much

Bitter and battered
Just the outside
Come scratch the surface
Of my shattered pride

You think you got scars
Been hurt in the past
I’ll inflict you with wounds
That forever will last

Cuz, I’ve broken hearts better
Than yours ever could be
Couldn’t keep this together
Or pull through for me

So I’ll show you a sorrow
You’d never have known
If you hadn’t fucked up
And left me alone

Look for the meaning
the truth in my rhyme
Maybe there’s more
Being said in each line

Maybe I love you
A cry for your heart
Words of pure passion
To rip you apart

Maybe I need you
The anger’s a shield
Could I forgive you
As these daggers I wield

Maybe I’m shattered
Just shaking and sad
Nah, Come look a bit closer
Deep down
………….I’m just mad

[geckosnipp]

:roll: :roll: :roll: <--- cowers in corner

Wow, that was very good. I loved the rythm of it and it did not get repedative at all. VEry descriptive and VERY felt. Id love to give that to my ex. At first i thought it was lil over the edge but what the hell. Nah i wount. Its still a VERY great poem and i like i like! A+!!!
:roll: <-Claps!

[Poor Yorick]

Cool, I liked it. :)

Um.... were you refering to your BF?

[Asphodelle13]

I love this and always enjoy reading your poetry Rubygirl...this poem is full of powerful wording with a quick pace...its bitter and pulses with hatred...I love it. :) Are you still working on it? I'd like to put it in the archive. If I were you though I wouldn't change anything.

I hope to read more of your poems in the future, keep writing. 8)

[Truth]

WOW... very intense... AS i read it.. I could not help but read it in this fast like pace cause I guess I related the anger with getting this off your chest rather quickly as if you were ranting you know.. but i loved this poem.. very well done...