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JHXMT
July 10th, 2002, 10:12 PM
...and I only wrote it because I was semi-drunk at the time. :roll: Oh well, I guess it's a start.

I'm going to hate myself for posting this later, but at the moment I'm bored and it just looks funny. :lol:

Ode To A Bottle

Such dappled luminescence.
Light refracts upon your curves,
The disjointed seam shining -
Holding fast the smooth subtlety
That contains the ebb and flow.

Circular chains rise,
Only to fall once more.
Darker beneath, and yet filled
With such calm fire,
And bubbling creation.

A final clink, the last gasp,
And all is gone, the bubbles spent,
Drained away into the insatiable maw.
A shattering, the seam splits.
Containment broken, it fades.

Truth
July 12th, 2002, 04:15 AM
DAMN that was GREAT, Chris...keep writing :D

JHXMT
July 12th, 2002, 09:38 PM
*reads a couple of days later*

:o

Didn't realise I wrote that... :lol: